Saturday, July 5, 2008

Stranger in the city

http://callmesmith.blogspot.com/2008/07/stranger-in-city.html

A short story just published on my short stories blog.

As always...i just write the words....why i write them is something even i wonder about.

Stuff i publish here is always in the first draft form...so it lacks the usual tightening to make it more alluring and crisp...yet i hope it shall be liked for what it say...

and i wonder what it say :P

88 comments:

Keshi said...

will read it soon, tnxx!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

Keshigirl...tomorrow never comes re :P

Keshi said...

I did read and repiled too!

:)
Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

nice sweet bachcha a u r :P

Keshi said...

hey hot n happening Delhi boi ;-)

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

aloha...aussi girl

Benaam Badnaam said...

she says hello and then she goes quiet!!! :P

Keshi said...

wut else bugs ya? :) Im here.

Shoot!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...

wat bugs u eh ;)

Keshi said...

lol wanna hear wut bugs me?

Keshi.

Keshi said...

that was quick.

bugs bug me :)

k jokes apart...I hate guys who smell bad and talk like they know everything..


Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

ok...atleast i'm safe on both the aspects...if i do smell its usually of hugo boss...which has a very subtle aroma...

and i usually do admit when i'm gassing (talking in thin air)... :D

Keshi said...

haha I dun think u talk empty.


**hugo boss

I love love love that fragrance! Even tho Im a girl, I used to spray it all over me (stealing my cousin bro's) everyday b4 I left home few years agao...when I used to flat with him. LOL!

Keshi.

Keshi said...

**ago

Keshi said...

*brb in 10*

:)

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

:P u don't have to post a correction to a typo :P

he he and i'm a sucker for sweet smelling ladies...and the click clack of their heels...

Keshi said...

so u hv a foot/shoe fetish. Interesting :)

I hv a stubble fetish. Im serious. :)

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

aha...makes life easier for ppl who r lazy and whose facial hair decides to grow by the hr

Benaam Badnaam said...

read ppl like me :P

Keshi said...

lolz d u keep a stubble?

Im massively attracted by a light stubble..along with Hugo Boss fragrance ;-)

I dun mean a long-bearded saadhu ok!


Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

in my earlier job when i was in my s/w engineer avtaar...i didnt use to shave the whole week..only to clean during the weekend...since all are clients were in US...

here i have to shave daily...aargh...but i still prfer a 2-3 day stubble as the most optimal way of living

Keshi said...

**...i didnt use to shave the whole week.

sexaaaaaaay! ;-)

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

danke :)

too much abt me...too little abt u

Keshi said...

wut d u wanna know abt me? if I keep a stubble? well no. LOL!

Keshi.

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Keshi said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...

sensibility...feminine charm...a zest for life...and a no taboo approach

Benaam Badnaam said...

an artistic bent of mind and compassion towards others... :P

Keshi said...

why didnt u just use one word for ALL of that. And thats KESHI.

lol!

Keshi.

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Keshi said...

ok so thats ALL that really matters?? :)

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

he he no...but it does make the conversation nice and naughty ;)

Keshi said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...

u wud rather...have a boring chap talk stuff tht shud be talked in the age range of 70?

:P i don't like jst talking kinky...but yes...if u see my top three list...

food, sex and movies...u see it figure prominently

Benaam Badnaam said...

now one jst wishes...if u live movies as i do :)

Keshi said...

:) I love movies..good ones..not fairy-floss, make-believe shit.



Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

wud tht include iron man...or does it come under good movies...

u know we dont like ppl who dont love comic heroes

Keshi said...

:)..I dunno..I meant movies like 'The pursuit of happyness'...


a new post is gonna be up in my blog shortly..u gotta take part ok. lol!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

oee tht was a gud movie...jst tht it wasn't meant to be seen in a hall...too slow for a hall

Keshi said...

so was it meant to be seen in bed with a kinky partner? mebbe...:)

check my new post!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

umm this movie...no...this is something u'd watch wid ure kid...

there are others...'more romantic/naughty' movies one wud rather see

Keshi said...

if u mean Porn, lol I hate em!

Keshi.

Keshi said...

I like naughty ones but not porn..

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

check out...walk all over me...its naughty and laughably silly

Keshi said...

k I'll check that out :) but did u check out my new post? ;-)

Keshi.

Keshi said...

btw who acts in it?

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

not yet will take a while to do that...immersed in work at the moment

Keshi said...

no probs. :)

tata!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

btw...how do u rake in ure daily bread?

Keshi said...

by writing s/w..

and u?

Keshi.

Keshi said...

k gtg..hv a good one!

Catchyalaterz! ;-)

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

i used to write software...then did my mba...now am a HR consultant

Keshi said...

cool!

I've done a Masters in Comm n Econ. Im an IT Consultant. I rite s/w as well as do Business Analysis.

hey btw come n take part ok :)

Keshi.

Keshi said...

*write

Keshi said...

btw is that u in ur profile pic? If so, u've got dreamy eyes...really nice...:)

Keshi.

Keshi said...

k gtg shopping now..wknds Im not very 'present' in Blogville. :) just came to say Hi.

hv a good one!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

hmm i wonder where u learnt to write the code... :P

yeah i was ok wid business analysis don't like writing code for money much...though its been years now since i wrote ne...wat language do u write in?

hmm so wat is on the shopping agenda...

why dont u add me on gtalk...girishkohli@gmail ...

u have a grt weekend too...i jst saw a nice flick last night...

Keshi said...

wut did ya see last nite?

I write in C#...

shopping...will tell u soon wut I bought ;-)



Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

saw this new aamir khan production....jaane tu...

nice fun movie...

ooh i used to write in C# too...we used to make web based technology solutions for our clients in the US...

nice u cud help me get back into the coder mode

and yeah now that u ;)...do tell me wat u bought

Benaam Badnaam said...

and hope to c u on gtalk or smething...as much as i write in public...i'm a very private person...

Keshi said...

awww..me too...Im quite private. o well, Im not on Gtalk..I hardly chat..thats why.

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

hmmm...mail? yahoo/msn msngr?

i'll be off abhi in 5 mins...going out for a while...

Keshi said...

im on yahoo...send me ur email.

k catch ya later, hv fun!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...
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Keshi said...

uk?

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

yes initially for india they were using the uk server!!!

Keshi said...

k :)

Will add u in soon.

Keshi.

Keshi said...

hey stranger :)

I dun chat from work...so I'd hv to go home n check ur msgs. tnxx!

Hows everything with ya?

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...
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Keshi said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...

btw watz the local time there right now?

Keshi said...

aww...

I agree...r'ships get complicated cos of ppl trying to PERFECT em.


Its 5:45pm here...

Will be going home soon...dunno if I'd be online tonite...but I'll see.


Keshi.

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Keshi said...

lol Mystique!

I tried to picture that..hahaha!

Kinky boots...hmm yeah they r, arent they!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...

and i liked the line i wrote abt u breaking me in...and i breaking u in back...nice thoughts ;)

Keshi said...

I like flat boots :) something chic abt em...

thigh high slut boots r kinky alrite!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...
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Benaam Badnaam said...

and kinky things apart...i really think u cud prolly help me re-learn what i have forgotten abt coding...

Benaam Badnaam said...

and hey am deleting some of our more private comments

Keshi said...

tnxx! noted it down. u may delete that comment now. for ur own privacy.

u wanna re-learn coding? I dun think. lol!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

oh yes...why to lose a skill...coding as a hobby is a nice past time...making websites for self and all...

not tht i fear being hounded by calls from the hundreds who read my blog :P but as a principal...not wise to have one's nbr floating around...so duely deleted

i read somewhere u wanted a massage ;)

Keshi said...

lolz I do..my neck n shoulders r aching from too much PC work!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

hmm...ok one deep muscle massage for neck and shoulders coming up...that'll be Aussi$ 50...the foot massage comes complimentary wid d offer ;)

hmm but on a serious note i understand wat u mean...i used to b a s/w engineer..and most of my work still happens of the laptop...
i usually get up and go for a walk evey half n hr :P or stretch like a cat unashamedly...but thats jst me

Keshi said...

only $50? thats cheap :)

I dunno..with my PC addiction, I mite end up dead in my chair one day. lol!

Keshi.

Benaam Badnaam said...

and u didnt even thank for the complimentary stuff...how rude...

umm don't worry if ur heart fails...will be there to give u mouth to mouth resucitation...no worry at all :P