love isn't as simple as it sounds...and quite often it doesnt get the priority it shud...these are my tears...when i see the world this way
when warmth is all that you want
and they try and barter you the world
when a hug is all you need
the world doesnt work...a single person is wat goes
when time flies
round and round and thoughts get entangled
and u find that u r tired of it all
that what came to u at the end...is what should've been there all along
when love is all that i want
why do u think anything else will work
i need someone who will give me the attention
when it requires u to lose...why are u still hung up on being in control
http://catastrophonix.blogspot.com/2008/12/give-in-into-love.html
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the last para is jarringly out of tune...
i didnt want this poem 'romantically beautiful'...these are tears...the pain is real...and in many ways personal...authors unlike the characters they write...live in the real world...
sometimes we read and appreciate the beauty of the words...what we don't realize is that somebody is going thru the pain that has been moulded into words
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